i like very much. Interested in any tiny editing suggestions? (Only because i know how you can read and reread a work so many times that you are too close to it to see it.) If not, think nothing of them, it is wonderful as is and keep up the good work! I look forward to more.
Truelee Fiction 
Interesting storyline.
Wonderfully chilling story. And very topical, of course. 🙂
I have to concur with Eric, the storyline is great, I liked it!
i like very much. Interested in any tiny editing suggestions? (Only because i know how you can read and reread a work so many times that you are too close to it to see it.) If not, think nothing of them, it is wonderful as is and keep up the good work! I look forward to more.
Back story….and future story now too plz